MonkeyWrench wrote:Q.Q Elf wrote:MonkeyWrench wrote:
Her mom died?!
Well then... Let's see, Her mom died when she was 8. Her father came home from work to find what looked like fang marks protruding from her neck and claw marks that mangled her body. Her father, Mark, has never been the same, trying to put up a smile for his children but otherwise being an extremely bitter and cold individual, consumed with trying to find the monster responsible. Her older brother, Jason, also changed since then, always training and looking in the paper for monster sightings or possible murder scenes; it seems he is following in his father footsteps. All the while Victoria tries to make sense of it all and still live up to her families traditions (monster hunting) and live with her family.
I'm pruning the tree ahead of time. As much as I need NPCs, I want only the ones that add more pain. If your pack may have led to her Mom's death, that's a win for the story, I think.
I don't need NPCs per se. I need hot cars that drive fast to do burnouts and donuts.
Hmm.... Then how about this, When the autopsy came back the wounds were very... wolf-like?
It was a suggestion, anyway. It doesn't have to be, but I think it would be cool if...
1) a Werewolf did do it.
2) Victoria knows a Werewolf did it
You know Seth's secret self will come out, and then something will have to happen because blood must be paid with blood.
Of course, if Seth doesn't want to kill Victoria, then he'll have to turn on his own kind and find out who did it.
I know who I want to have done the deed... because it's poetic & shit...
Ah, f*ck it. I'll just come out and say it.
So,
MonkeyWrench, when did Seth's father first come to the town? Why did he kill Victoria's mother?
(Yeah, this is bullsh!t, and if you don't like where this is going, fine, we can ditch the question... but I think it's hot. A hot damn mess
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